Mental health treatment reform, Rehabilitation programs, Alternative housing models, Policy and advocacy efforts

I have attached my original CP and my revised AP. The AP has already been rewritten to focus on advocacy, solutions, and policy reform, so please do not change it back into a problem-focused paper. The paper should stay around 2,000 words. My main goal is to improve the flow, organization, and readability. Please make the writing a little simpler and more natural while still sounding academic and appropriate for a strong high school senior or first-year college student. Please: Improve transitions between paragraphs and sections Make the paper flow more smoothly Simplify any overly formal, awkward, or repetitive wording Strengthen analysis after evidence when needed Make sure each section clearly connects back to the thesis Check MLA formatting, in-text citations, Works Cited, and Annotated Bibliography Fix any grammar, punctuation, or sentence structure issues The paper should remain focused on: Mental health treatment reform Rehabilitation programs Alternative housing models Policy and advocacy efforts Please keep the current structure, sources, and arguments. The goal is to polish and strengthen the paper, not completely rewrite it or significantly change the content.