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Can you proofread, spruce up, etc this intro and make sure it meets the requirements? You are required to complete a final project for this course. For this first part of the project, complete your Introduction of the final paper. This should consist of two paragraphs. The first paragraph describes the problem of the client you are going to see. You should describe why they are coming in, what motivated them? It’s a brief story. Your second paragraph should explain about their electronic addiction, including risks, issues, etc. You may use the first four questions in the above list as a guide. For complete guidelines and requirements of the final project paper, please refer to the *Final Project* area of the course Web site. Step 1: Final Project Part I: Introduction Complete your Introduction of the final paper. This should consist of two paragraphs. The first paragraph describes the problem of the client you are going to see. You should describe why they are coming in, what motivated them? It’s a brief story. Your second paragraph should explain about their electronic addiction, including risks, issues, etc. You may use the first four questions in the above list as a guide. Consult the course Calendar for due date. - 1. What is the presenting electronic addiction problem? Provide a brief statement regarding why this student has come in today. What motivated this client to get help? - 2. What is the electronic addiction? Describe any short and/or long term risks of this addiction. Relate this information specifically to this client’s situation. - 3. What is/was the progression of use of this addiction? (Social issues?) - 4. What changed to cause your client to suddenly seek treatment? Paragraph 1 You clearly and intelligently describe the client's problem, why the client is coming in, and what motivated the client. You adequately describe the client's problem, why the client is coming in, and what motivated the client. You superficially describe the client's problem, why the client is coming in, and what motivated the client. You inadequately describe the client's problem, why the client is coming in, and what motivated the client. null Paragraph 2 You clearly and intelligently explain the client's electronic addiction. You satisfactorily explain the client's electronic addiction. You superficially explain the client's electronic addiction. You inadequately explain the client's electronic addiction. null Overall organization You lucidly organize material into well-formed paragraphs and arrange ideas logically to support the purpose of the paper; writing is fluid with an explicit focus and sensible structure. You logically organize material into well-formed paragraphs; writing has focus and structure. You loosely organize material and provide limited supporting detail; writing is somewhat disjointed and disorganized. You incoherently organize material, often impairing the reader's ability to comprehend it; significant details are missing or irrelevant; writing is completely disjointed and lacks correct form and structure. null Overall use of evidence You support points and subpoints with abundant clarifying detail, include relevant and clearly attributed sources as necessary, and effectively link ideas. You support most points and subpoints with sufficient detail, attribute sources as necessary, and link ideas. You support points and subpoints with limited detail and improperly link ideas. You inadequately support points and subpoints with irrelevant detail and do not properly link ideas. null Overall mechanics You write in complete, well-constructed sentences with faultless grammar, word choice, punctuation, and spelling; writing is sharp, coherent, and demonstrates sophisticated clarity. You write in complete sentences with mostly correct grammar, word choice, punctuation, and spelling; minor errors may exist but do not compromise meaning. You write in unclear sentences with significant errors in grammar, word choice, punctuation, and spelling that may compromise meaning. You write in incomplete, incomprehensible sentences filled with serious errors in grammar, word choice, punctuation, or spelling. null